I really love this story and loved the update. Ive been waiting forever for this update and cannot wait for another one hopefully soon.


Alisha

OMG! I do not know how I could have possibly missed the first two chapters before. So beautiful. Clearly, you've spoken of your desire to relish every detail in full color of the senses. This one achieves that, in content and flourish. There is a sweetness in how they immediately liked one another, that probably would have come across as campy if Adam had not been blind. As Avery noticed, there were certain elements of being strangers that he never concerned himself with because he couldn't physically see Blake. And that put the other man at ease as well, allowing Blake to put his guard down too. I cannot wait for more, but always willing to, if that's what you give us. Nothing short of perfection:)

Well they are buried pretty far back in the community, that's probably just it. You found it now though, so it's all good.

I'm so glad you like it. I aim to please, usually...alright, kinda.

Yes. Detail are my craft and I love them. I told someone recently, perhaps it was you? Idk. Anyway, I want to make someone feel as though they are there, in the mind and soul of the person which the story is about. This story needs it more than all the others because Adam is blind in it. There are so many doors that are opened with that premise, while one big one is closed. Sight is something we all take for granted, but never do we think about life without it.

I am so glad that it is that good, this story started out as a prompt from another user in the community. "Some kind of disability" and the first thing that came to my mind was being blind. The person could still be who they were but with a few changes that makes everything different and yet the same.